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Post#1 » 21 Oct 2016 00:42

Hey, since this area is called art and music, here's some music. This thread is for posting songs we've written and recieving positive pointers and suggestions. Here's one of the two songs I've written:

VALIANCE DESTROYED
RYDER KYLOS
3/27/16
Waking up, I dress myself
Taking clothes off the shelf
Seeing the mirror, I do not grin
Not mad or sad, it's just that within
I see my true self, dressed in leather and black
I'm back to back
With my reflection
I get up, feeling perfection

Riding to school, music blasting
Getting out of the car, perfection everlasting
I walk the halls, confident and proud
I walk inside, valiant; unbowed
Sitting down, they walk inside
Secretly inside, I try to hide

Sitting down, stone faced and dunce
He looks at me, and all at once
He points and laughs, but I stand proud
He questions my looks, a rude storm cloud
I feel the urge to punch
But hold back and wait for lunch
I cry inside but act my normal
And he speaks of how I'm abnormal
I search my soul

In whole
I find myself, remember who he is
Behind my back, pointing- having a whiz
I secretly flip him off
I wish I could pounce, watching him scoff
I feel the urge to punch
But I'll just wait for lunch
Another day, another time
One day, I'll show him, but meantime...
I'll wait for lunch
I need to punch
I cry inside
I'm dying, and in my chair I hunch
Wishing everything away
I slowly decay
I have to punch…
I'll die waiting for lunch...
​Be fantastic, Kill walkers, Tame creatures, Allon-sy!
Driver picks the music shotgun shuts his cakehole
What kind of house doesn't have salt? Low sodium freaks. I found a liquor store and I drank it. Am I The only one zen around here? INTJ-T. Slytherin.

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Post#2 » 30 Mar 2017 02:06

Interesting, did younwrite a melody for this song? Does it use another songs melody?
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Post#3 » 30 Mar 2017 02:23

smartdevon wrote:Interesting, did younwrite a melody for this song? Does it use another songs melody?



Dunno how to music past lyrics.
​Be fantastic, Kill walkers, Tame creatures, Allon-sy!
Driver picks the music shotgun shuts his cakehole
What kind of house doesn't have salt? Low sodium freaks. I found a liquor store and I drank it. Am I The only one zen around here? INTJ-T. Slytherin.

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Post#4 » 16 Aug 2017 12:12

I'm writing songs for a comic musical I'm crafting. Might need some help at some point.
I am not brave, I am only just, for fear knows no man's name better than the one called "fearless", but there is no fear in love.

Hunt evil, Kill beasts, Slay darkness, and SURVIVE!

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Post#5 » 20 Dec 2017 00:56

Here’s a dead thread but I wrote another poem song thingy a while back and just remembered.
I spent a lot of time traveling
Up inside my own mind
It was a paradise of a kind
I never saw it coming
The one man army
I never saw it coming
I was the enemy
Trapped inside
I just wanted to die
Screaming, pleading
Can somebody save me
Is anybody out there
Lost in the echo of my shouting
I couldn’t help but to think
When you’re in a war against yourself
You will always die
If there’s no escape
Where do I go
Where do I run
Where do I hide
​Be fantastic, Kill walkers, Tame creatures, Allon-sy!
Driver picks the music shotgun shuts his cakehole
What kind of house doesn't have salt? Low sodium freaks. I found a liquor store and I drank it. Am I The only one zen around here? INTJ-T. Slytherin.

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