Probored wrote:Hi! While I may not be an art student, I did lurk around on a art forum for a few years. While Im usually better at critiquing pixelart and drawings, Ill share some C+C with you. Take this with a grain of salt if you will and Im probably going to miss the point of your art class.
First and foremost, theses drawings are gorgeous, you use good colors with good saturation and provide good shading as evidenced by the dog's inner ear and eye. Your main problem is readability (unless you are going for a abstract, than this is a moot point). Readability means being able to understand what the drawing is at a glance. I almost mistook your lion as a bear, your eagle looks a bit like a wattles-less rooster and I cant exactly make out what that lower left animal is...a dragon? I also have no idea whats going on on your dog's face.
Other than that everything else looks beautiful, especially the coat of arms and the mountain ☺
Probored wrote:My pleasure, and impressionism was the word I was going for. While the colors you use are very good, can I recommend using much bolder and eye candy colors?
Modern Impressionism, so might not be the kind you are going for
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